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Placid
Open sky
Blue, pink, purple
It's sunset
Most beautiful
Time of day
I believe.
We are
Together
Right now
Under
Orange clouds
Sitting on
Green grass
You, playing
That guitar
I gave
You.
Soft wind
Brushes past
I feel it
Whisper
Your love
For
Me
I smile
At you
You
Smile back.
I look
Deep
Into your
Golden eyes
Showing
Me
A world
Your
World
Ours.
Open sky
Blue, pink, purple
It's sunset
Most beautiful
Time of day
I believe.
We are
Together
Right now
Under
Orange clouds
Sitting on
Green grass
You, playing
That guitar
I gave
You.
Soft wind
Brushes past
I feel it
Whisper
Your love
For
Me
I smile
At you
You
Smile back.
I look
Deep
Into your
Golden eyes
Showing
Me
A world
Your
World
Ours.
Trying a different approach to my poem writing - short poems 
!
Yeah, I've had a few a little bit back and then I kinda got carried away with the big words and needing to make it look long.
I still think this is pretty long and I know I still need to improve.
I think I'll look into haikus .. they're usually very short, simple but all the while meaningful.
Well, thank you for viewing :butterflytwo:
Copyright by Lidia .S. Lay 2007
!Yeah, I've had a few a little bit back and then I kinda got carried away with the big words and needing to make it look long.
I still think this is pretty long and I know I still need to improve.
I think I'll look into haikus .. they're usually very short, simple but all the while meaningful.
Well, thank you for viewing :butterflytwo:Copyright by Lidia .S. Lay 2007
© 2007 - 2024 MiQxNoiR
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I love the poem itself, but it's sort of hard to read without more punctuation, ya know? lol. But other than that, I really like it. XD *luff* :Leah: